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Regan's
a young lady with the usual problems. She's had a messy breakup,
is unemployed in a new town, living with her brother, and is in
love with a lady who happens to be straight. She's
also got to contend with a legion of walking corpses.
The
zombie threat happens pretty early on in the book and it's hinted
that it's much worse than when we are introduced to it, since
the police department has a message telling you not to go near
"untalkative assailants." The story follows two primary
characters - Regan and Alisia. Regan came to Autar to live with
her scientist brother, and Alisia is the head, and only living
member left, of the AIT (Autar Inflitration Troup). When Alisia's
newest partner gets killed she meets up with Regan, who has been
surviving in the city for two years on her own.
What's
interesting about these zombies is that your standard head-shot
doesn't kill them right away. It's easier to take out their legs
or shoot their heads off and let the bodies decay from there.
Personally, I like traditional zombies a bit better. Also, the
zombie virus is a program in the nanobots. The nanobots are used
for other things in the book as well, and since they're a prominent
player in the book, we do learn a little bit more of them and
I liked the direction the author was taking with them.
One
thing that was a little unnecessary was the "Infodumps"
scattered throughout the book. These infodumps give you information
on people and things in the book. These work kind of work kind
of like "notes in the margin," but the story would have
flowed better if they were incorporated into it.
The
book is full of typos. There are quite a bit in here and, while
the story flows nicely, seeing words spelled correctly helps maintain
that flow. When you have to stop and comprehend a word that's
spelled incorrectly and then think about what the word SHOULD
be, it takes you out of the story. This book also has also a lot
of incomplete sentences and incorrect punctuation. Better editing
would have made a huge difference.
Another
gripe is that Regan's attitude is way too upbeat for surviving
in a zombie infested city for two years. Heres someone who
is beyond hope in a city infested by zombies. She learns how to
use weapons and becomes very resourceful, but when shes
reintroduced to people its like shes a part of society
again. If you were stuck in a zombie infested city for two years
and you developed specific routines to just stay alive these routines
stay with you even when youre reintroduced into society.
Sure there were some moments where she almost broke down, but
ultimately this was not portrayed well.
The
book also has some MAJOR lesbian themes. This doesn't really bother
me, but I'd prefer more character development than what was done.
Primarily we get a lesbian constantly hitting on a straight woman.
The dialogue was done really well and gives you some laugh-out-loud
moments as well as lots of profanity.
Since
this book is partially about lesbians, some lesbian sex scenes
would have been very welcome. We get an aftermath of hetero-sex
and a couple of lesbian kisses. Thats all.
This
is Joseph Picard's first book, and while he has some very good
intentions (the zombie creating nanobots are a really good idea)
he's still got a lot of room to grow. The plot is decent and the
story isn't too bad, and while the dialogue can be funny at times
can also be juvenile.
This
brings me to the descriptions of the zombie chaos. I feel that
this book was not as descriptive as it could have been. Sure we
do get some good descriptions but there were scenes which I felt
were left a little vague. Maybe its just me.
This
isnt really a bad book, sure its got its flaws but
the plot and story is good. The delivery just has to be worked
on. From what I read on Joseph Picards blog, hes going
to do doing some rewrites. Hopefully this will bring some much
needed improvements.
Im
giving it a 5 out of 10
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